Monday, May 07, 2007

Fleeting visions...

The year has reached the peak of its youth...
The seasons are rolling by,and all ive done is sit agape,
at the wind whispering to me,
at the raindrops telling their stories,
at the leaves rustling...gossipping about a past so illustrious...
a musty smell rises up,
as the quenched earth breathes out...
like votive candles...wavering in spring's last sigh...


It has been a long time since ive touched you...
the electric spark...the indescribable sensation...
lingers in every corner of my memory palace...
unwilling to fade into oblivion...


I felt like that survivor,
brought back from the depths of the Atlantic,
where the line between dream and darkness blur rs beyond recognition,
when i felt your breath on my face...
when i held your arm...and knew
that the Elements may falter but my grip will not...
when i knew that this 5 minutes of passion would be immortalised forever...


Oft i sit on my couch
and the golden times touch my mind,
like silver curtains rustling in autumn's own breath...
And as the musty smell wafts though the air...
I catch a fleeting glimpse...of a maiden running,
in a forgotten land...in a space that is a void to mortal eyes,

A flash of legs and a flutter of angel eyes...
a golden halo...too devine for mortal eyes to rest upon,
painted upon god's own child...

With each step that she took away from me,
with each word that she spoke...
my heart crackled in its own pyre...
in a flame of uncontrolled desire...passion...
waiting for the flame to be quenched,
by a touch of her lips...elixir of my life,
waiting for the embers to die down,
by the sweet nothings whispered into my ear,
waiting for the pain to ease away,
in the shade of her hair...
an impeccable nightfall...that kindles the light for a passion-filled dawn...


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Okay folks...i did come back earlier than expected...but im still not fully...back, as in still got exams to take care of...this is a piece i wrote in my school...don't have anything better to do there...looks good...esp a certain anon visitor would be pleased...Ahem!

be back soon!

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dude...there a woman in ur life?! Lotta times i thot of askin u that...but hey its difficult to even digest the question...let alone the seemingly horse shitty answer.

on better note...great work once again! A better post after a loong time...waiting for the promised erotica...

Anonymous said...

oh whata romantic poem that was..i could almost feel the touch...the scenes...the whole environment..estel dat was TRULY AMAZING!!!Lovely writing! keep it up!

love...Sarah

Anonymous said...

just this once mister...u left me truly speechless....





PS - i noticed the part about the legs!

Estel said...

Hell anon...speechless?! I seem to be gettin bettter and bettter by the day...i think this surpassed a certain piece u submbled upon...only u stumbled upon to be precise!

Anonymous said...

i did...it did surpass that one...but then that one will always have the charm of being the first one u know!

Anonymous said...

n yes...like sarah said....truly amazing estel....i too could feel the whole environment, verrry passionate sir....lucky bitch, that anon of urs!